高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文：Green Action in Our Class
導(dǎo)語(yǔ)：小編為你整理，每年全國(guó)各地的高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文，說(shuō)不定其中就有你不知如何下筆的類型。拿起你的筆記來(lái)記錄吧，為你的英語(yǔ)作文添亮點(diǎn)，讓英語(yǔ)成績(jī)更出色。
【北京卷】
【試題回放】情景作文
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國(guó)的號(hào)召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹(shù)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹(shù)活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動(dòng)”專欄寫(xiě)一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。
注意：詞數(shù)不少于60
提示詞：郊區(qū)suburbs
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點(diǎn)連貫，在語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)等較好的句式表達(dá)。
英語(yǔ)專四作文滿分范文：學(xué)生評(píng)價(jià)老師
專四題目：學(xué)生評(píng)價(jià)老師
Many students are required to evaluate their teachers but some teachers complain that these evaluations are unfair and can in some cases lead to the dismissal of a teacher. In your opinion, is the students' evaluation of their teacher a worthwhile exercise?
專四范文：
Difficulties with Students' Evaluation of Their Teacher
The students' evaluation of their teacher can be a very subjective proposition because it depends a lot on how the evaluation is made and how it is subsequently used. I believe most teachers would like to know how effective their teaching really is and how it benefits their students.
A difficulty with students' evaluation of their teacher is finding the right formulae to achieve an honest, constructive and independent response. The size and makeup of the class can be a reason for this difficulty. The larger the class the more likely will be the range of ability in the students. That fact Limits the interaction between the teacher and individual students and automatically influences how students will perceive the effectiveness of their teacher. Smaller classes are much less likely to have a great range of ability in the students and their evaluation of their teacher will tend to be more consistent. A crucial aspects with students' evaluation is how it is used. If it is a formal part of the school's program it needs to be used constructively in liaison with the teachers for the benefit of both teachers and students.
For students' evaluations to be worthwhile they need to be independent and honest. Negative comments from students, delivered with sincerity, can be very valuable in helping teachers change their teaching methods and making them more effective. Biased evaluations can lead to misinterpretation and less productive outcome. (237 words)
更多專四作文精彩句子：
1.An evaluation process depends on the methods used and how the evaluation is applied.
評(píng)價(jià)過(guò)程取決于使用的評(píng)價(jià)方法以及評(píng)價(jià)是如何進(jìn)行的。
2.When dealing with opinions,it is usually very difficult to be entirely objective,
我們表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，很難做到完全客觀。
3.Teachers can be more effective with genuine feedback from their students.
老師從學(xué)生那里得到真實(shí)的反饋時(shí)，他們會(huì)更有效率。
4.Class size has a significant impact on students’ perceptions of their teacher.
班級(jí)大小對(duì)學(xué)生對(duì)老師的看法有重要的影響。
5.In some ways,negative feedback is more valuable to a teacher than positive comments.
在某種程度上，負(fù)面的反饋比正面的評(píng)價(jià)對(duì)老師更有價(jià)值。
相關(guān)鏈接：
英語(yǔ)專四作文滿分范文：強(qiáng)制學(xué)生上課
2016年高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文及名師點(diǎn)評(píng)
導(dǎo)語(yǔ)：高考英語(yǔ)作文向來(lái)都是高考考生認(rèn)為的一大難點(diǎn)，想得滿分并不容易，判分老師們更青睞那些文章呢？小編為考生們準(zhǔn)備了大量的高考滿分作文和名師點(diǎn)評(píng)，希望大家認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)，對(duì)高考沖刺階段的英語(yǔ)提分有所幫助。
2012高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文(上海)
描述你在學(xué)校的一次午餐，具體要求如下：
詳細(xì)描述用餐的情況
簡(jiǎn)要表述你對(duì)這次午餐的感受
這是一篇簡(jiǎn)單卻需要挖掘的文章，因?yàn)槿绻皇敲枋鲇貌颓闆r，顯然缺乏深度，夸夸其談，流于表面。學(xué)生拿到這樣的題目需要仔細(xì)考慮用餐背后的東西。比較容易想到的話題是食物浪費(fèi)、用餐衛(wèi)生、餐桌禮儀等。在創(chuàng)作范文中，筆者另辟蹊徑，通過(guò)大多數(shù)同齡人用餐時(shí)的匆忙來(lái)襯托“我”的悠然自得，凸顯出在緊張的高中學(xué)生生涯中，作者能夠留有一片心靈凈土，通過(guò)飲食來(lái)調(diào)節(jié)情緒，更好地面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)，表現(xiàn)出樂(lè)觀的人生態(tài)度。此文結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單，文筆清新，語(yǔ)言精準(zhǔn)，并運(yùn)用了高中階段常見(jiàn)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，不失為一個(gè)很好的作文模板，供學(xué)生借鑒。
范文：
The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found
elsewhere.
The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words)
一、語(yǔ)法解構(gòu)
現(xiàn)在分詞作定語(yǔ) the bell indicating theend of the last class rang
倒裝句
(1)out of the classroom pouredall students but one
(2)Greasy as some dishesmight be
不定式 Iwas in no hurry to make arun for the school canteen
狀語(yǔ)從句 I arrived at the canteenwhenamassive queue had formed.
在分詞作狀語(yǔ) Waiting formy turnpatiently。
2016年高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文及名師點(diǎn)評(píng)
作文題目
假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來(lái)信請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫(huà)提供的信息，寫(xiě)信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)：100左右：
2.參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours, Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中注意長(zhǎng)短句并用，還使用了以'which，’引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場(chǎng)佳作。
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours, Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。
Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng)，由遠(yuǎn)及近。由外及內(nèi)，層次分明，錯(cuò)落有致。同時(shí)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整，從開(kāi)頭的問(wèn)候語(yǔ)到結(jié)尾都很完備。
Dear Bob,
I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. I’ve already found you a house near our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.
You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month. Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文內(nèi)容具體，詳略得當(dāng)，表述方式很有創(chuàng)造力和新意，長(zhǎng)短句并用，語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)富于變化，錯(cuò)落有致，順暢圓潤(rùn)，尤其是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞和分詞的運(yùn)用很獨(dú)到，為文章增色不少。
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you. The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Yours,
Li Hua
2016年高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文及名師點(diǎn)評(píng)
導(dǎo)語(yǔ)：高考英語(yǔ)作文向來(lái)都是高考考生認(rèn)為的一大難點(diǎn)，想得滿分并不容易，判分老師們更青睞那些文章呢？小編為考生們準(zhǔn)備了大量的高考滿分作文和名師點(diǎn)評(píng)，希望大家認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)，對(duì)高考沖刺階段的英語(yǔ)提分有所幫助。
【試題回放】
實(shí)現(xiàn)有效的溝通，建立良好的人際關(guān)系，不僅要善于言表，更要學(xué)會(huì)傾聽(tīng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇題為 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演講稿。
注意：
1、對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。
2、詞數(shù)150左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3、演講稿中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。
Good afternoon, everyone.
The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.
Thank you for your listening!
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這是一篇感情真摯、熱情洋溢的演講稿，文中大量運(yùn)用排比句型，不但準(zhǔn)確流暢地表達(dá)出題目中所提供的信息，而且體現(xiàn)出作者熟練運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)合句式，將傾聽(tīng)的對(duì)象及其作用闡述得淋漓盡致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句議論應(yīng)如何傾聽(tīng)，則更進(jìn)一步地增強(qiáng)了這篇演說(shuō)稿的說(shuō)服力。
2016年高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文及名師點(diǎn)評(píng)
導(dǎo)語(yǔ)：高考英語(yǔ)作文向來(lái)都是高考考生認(rèn)為的一大難點(diǎn)，想得滿分并不容易，判分老師們更青睞那些文章呢？小編為考生們準(zhǔn)備了大量的高考滿分作文和名師點(diǎn)評(píng)，希望大家認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)，對(duì)高考沖刺階段的英語(yǔ)提分有所幫助。
【全國(guó)卷I海南、寧夏】
【試題回放】
假定你是李華，正在英國(guó)接受英語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國(guó)人家里。今天你的房東Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你準(zhǔn)備外出，請(qǐng)給Mrs. Wilson 寫(xiě)一留言條，內(nèi)容包括：
1.外出購(gòu)物
2.替房東還書(shū)
3.Tracy 來(lái)電話留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見(jiàn)面取消
2)此事已告知Susan
3) 盡快回電
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Mrs. Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]
本文屬于提綱式要點(diǎn)作文，是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實(shí)用性，生活型的原則。行文人稱、時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)、準(zhǔn)確，各個(gè)要點(diǎn)間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書(shū)面表達(dá)不是簡(jiǎn)單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)合理的組成比較通順的語(yǔ)句，因此要仔細(xì)組織語(yǔ)言，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語(yǔ)言方面，要特別注意簡(jiǎn)潔明了，開(kāi)頭要開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山。
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