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　　篇一：英語作文

我的冒險作文

　　中國學生為什么難寫出好英語作文

　　昨天來了個外國人，走到辦公室，一女士左看右看，大家都在打游戲，只有自己比較清閑，就面帶微笑地說： “Hello, you have what thing”（你有什么事）外國人：“Can you speak English”（你會講英語嗎）女士：“If I not speak English, I am speaking what”（如果我不會說，那我現在說的什么）外國人：“Can anybody else speak English”（還有誰能講英語嗎）女士：“You yourself look. All people are playing, no people have time, you can wait, you wait, you not wait, you go.”（你自己看看，所有人都在玩呢，都沒空，你愿意等就等，不愿意就走）外國人：“Good havens, anybody here can speak English”（我的上帝，這兒有誰會說英語嗎）女士：“Shout what shout, quiet a little, you on earth have what thing.”（喊什么喊，安靜點，你到底有什么事）外國人：“I want to speak to your head.”（我想和你的領導談談）女士：“Head not zai. You tomorrow come.”（頭兒不再，你明天再來吧）漢語思維

　　思維――中文――英文

　　我們掌握了一定量的單詞和句型，但是在運用這些單詞和句型的時候，我們往往會先在腦海中構造一個中文的句式，然后再把它翻譯成英文。

　　我們的思維轉變成中文的速度太快了，快到你自己意識不到這種轉換完成了，所以腦海中永遠都是成型的中文句子，地道的中文句子。于是在寫作的時候，同學們總是面對中文句子，從第一個詞開始動筆翻譯，最后呈現的是一篇生硬的英語譯文，而非英語作文。

　　糾正這個習慣就要平時在英語寫作訓練上注意克服對中文的依賴。習慣是由于重復而產生的，也只能通過更多次的重復去消除掉。英語作文的總體評分原則

　　高分作文的寫作要素體現在閱卷人員所依據的評分原則和評分標準—總體評分（Global Scoring）之中。閱卷人員主要憑對文章的總體印象和總體表達效果給分。這表明作文是就內容和語言兩方面給分。語言和內容是一個統一體，要求內容切題、表達清楚、意義連貫、句法多變、語言正確。

　　1）內容切題：不能走題、偏題。

　　2）表達清楚：要讓別人知道你想說什么，不要用你認為能看懂的漢語式英文句子，比如： In your letter I have a word don’t understand.(在你的信里我有一個字不明白)這樣的英語句子只能讓閱卷人員捧腹大笑，然后給你“溫柔一刀” 。

　　3）意義連貫：中英文化差異造成思維方式和文字表述方式的不同，英文表述更注重事實，所以寫英語作文不要過多的進行心理、環境描寫，作文結構要縝密，理由和例子要簡潔有力，說明問題，不要東拉西扯。

　　4）句法多變：為避免文章平淡、呆板，可使用不同的句式：強調句、倒裝句、否定句等等。

　　5）語言正確：不要犯低級的語法錯誤。英語寫作的基本原則長短句原則

　　工作需要一張一馳，寫作文也是如此。寫一個短小精辟的句子，可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題：

　　As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.

　　主題句原則

　　同學們一定要寫一個主題句，放在文章的開頭（保險型）或者結尾，讓讀者一目了然。

　　特別提示：隱藏主題句可是要冒險的！

　　To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主題句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly. 一二三原則

　　考官們看文章也必然要通過這些關鍵性的“標簽”來判定你的文章是否結構清楚，條理自然。應對方法很簡單，只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。 1）first， second， third， last

　　2）firstly， secondly， thirdly， finally

　　3）the first， the second， the third， the last

　　4）in the first place， in the second place， in the third place，lastly 5）to begin with， then， furthermore， finally 6）to start with， next， in addition， finally 7）first and foremost， besides， last but not least 8）most important of all， moreover， finally 9）on the one hand， on

　　the other hand 10）for one thing， for another thing 多實少虛原則

　　原因很簡單，寫文章還是應該寫一些實際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實詞，少用虛詞。這里所說的虛詞是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個人很好的時候，不應該只說nice這樣空洞的詞，應該使用一些諸如generous，interesting， smart， gentle， warm-hearted之類的形象詞。

　　走出房間，最一般的詞是：walk out of the room

　　但是小偷走出房間應該說：slip out of the room 小孩走出房間應該說：dance out of the room 老人走出房間應該說：stagger out of the room 所以多用實詞，少用虛詞，文章將會大放異彩！挑戰極限原則

　　在學生的作文中，很少發現使用獨立主格的句子。

　　The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.

　　Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.

　　如果你能寫出一些這樣的句子，不得高分才怪！也很少發現使用虛擬語氣。

　　Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.

　　考官本來經常考這個句型，而如果我們自己寫出來，你說考官會怎么想呢？

　　寫好英語句子必須注意“五性” 一、準確性

　　用詞準確是寫好作文的關鍵。用詞準確不僅僅指拼寫正確，還指選用的詞在搭配及所表達的詞義上與句意相吻合。我們常見到這樣的情況，將所有“對應”的詞放入句中，造出的句子會不合適。例如：你應該要更注意你的發音。

　　誤：You should more notice your pronunciation.

　　正：You should pay more attention to your pronunciation.

　　析：此處的“注意”應用 pay attention to 來表達，notice 主要指通過感覺器官注意到的。

　　此外，用詞不準確還體現在詞的搭配及一些習慣用語上。如：我們搭起帳篷，開始生火做飯。

　　誤：We put up the tent， and set fire to cook. 正：We put up the tent， and made a fire to cook. 析：set fire，其意為“放火燒了”，與“生火”意義相去甚遠。二、得體性

　　用詞的得體性是指在選詞時要考慮全文及所要表達的思想。所以在選詞時，既要考慮語氣、風格和語體，還應考慮詞義的褒貶問題。例如：我們在農場四周看了看。差：We looked around the farm. 好：We made a tour of the farm.

　　好：We were shown around the farm. 析：look around意為“（原地不動）環視”，與“四處看看”意義相去甚遠。

　　另外，語言的得體性，還指所寫語言要合乎一定的語言環境，比如一位同學給其好友寫信，信末用了這樣一個句子:

　　I’d appreciate it if you would write me an earlier reply.

　　從語法上來看這是一個無可挑剔的句子，但用在這里不得體。因為這是一個非常正式的結構，多用于對上級或陌生人，朋友之間是不宜使用這種口氣的。如果使用:

　　I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon . 就好多了，得體多了。三、高級性

　　高級性指在作文中使用了較高級的結構或較高級詞匯。 “較高級詞匯” 主要包括以下幾個方面：

　　一是考試大綱中沒有卻又在閱讀時經常碰上的詞匯，二是指有些詞匯雖在考綱之內，但其用法是教材中不曾有或較少見的，若運用得當，可視為高級詞匯。

　　三是有的簡單詞匯由于結合使用了較新穎的表達形式，或在特定的語言環境下運用地恰到好處，也可視為高級用法；四是句型結構的高級

　　性，如非謂語動詞的使用、各類從句的使用等。聽到這消息，我感到有點泄氣。

　　When I heard the news, I felt a little discouraged. Hearing the news, I felt kind of discouraged.

　　析：第2句有兩處顯得高級：一是使用了非謂語動詞，二是使用了kind of（有點）這一帶副詞性質的短語。四、靈活性

　　寫作與單項選擇不同，它并不是考查我們對一個特定詞語的記憶和理解能力。不論是誰，在寫作中都會碰到難以表達的或不會表達的詞語，這時我們不要硬譯，而是靈活處理。也就是說不要受漢語句子的束縛進行逐字逐句的翻譯。

　　我的一些同學在醫院里陪著我。

　　Some of my classmates stayed with me in the hospital.

　　析：句中的“陪”不好表達，這時我們可理解為“和我在一起”，即be/stay with me.

　　請聽聽這首歌的片段。

　　Please listen to a few seconds of the song. 析：“片段”怎么說？實難表達。這時我們可用a few seconds of the song來表達，同樣有異曲同工之妙。五、地道性所謂地道性，就是指寫出的英語句子要盡量符合英美本族人的習慣和風格，或者說要使句子盡量帶點“洋味”。謝謝你陪我們玩。

　　欠妥：Thank you for playing with us.

　　地道：Thank you for sharing the time with us. 析：play 表示“玩”，多用于小孩，將之用于成年人，顯得用得很幼稚，甚至可笑。若改用 share the time with，則不僅更準確，而且非常地道。

　　篇二：高中英語作文范文：完美的心

　　高中英語作文范文：完美的心

　　完美的心

　　One day a young man was standing in the middle of the town proclaiming1) that he had the most beautiful heart in the whole valley. A large crowd gathered, and they all admired his heart for it was perfect. There was not a flaw2) in it.

　　Suddenly, an old man appeared and said, "Why3), your heart is not nearly as beautiful as mine!"

　　The crowd and the young man looked at the old man's heart. It was full of scars. It had places where pieces had been removed and other pieces put in, but they didn't fit quite right, and there were several jagged4) edges. In fact, in some places there were deep gouges5) where whole pieces were missing.

　　The young man laughed. "Comparing your heart with mine, mine is perfect and yours is a mess of scars."

　　"Yes," said the old man, "Yours looks perfect but I would never trade with you. You see, every scar represents a person to whom I have given my love. I tear out a piece of my heart and give it to them, and often they give me a piece of their heart that fits into the empty place in my heart.

　　"But because the pieces aren't exact, I have some rough edges, which I cherish, because they remind me of the love we shared.

　　"Sometimes I have given pieces of my heart away, and the other person hasn't returned a piece of his or her heart to me. These are the empty gouges - giving love is taking a chance.

　　"Although these gouges are painful, they stay open, reminding me of the love I have for those people too, and I hope someday they may return and fill the space I've been waiting. So now do you see what true beauty is"

　　The young man walked up to the old man, reached into his perfect heart, and ripped6) a piece out. He offered it to the old man.

　　The old man placed it in his heart, then took a piece from his old scarred heart and placed it in the wound in the young man's heart. It fit, but not perfectly, as there were some jagged edges.

　　The young man looked at his heart, not perfect anymore but more beautiful than ever, since love from the old man's heart flowed into his.They embraced7) and walked away side by side.

　　How sad it must be to go through life with a whole untouched heart!一天,一個年輕人站在鎮子的中央,宣稱他擁有整個山谷最美麗的心。一大群人圍了過來,都交口稱贊年輕人的心,因為這顆心完美無瑕。

　　一位老者突然出現了,說道:"嗨,你的心可不如我的心美麗啊!"

　　這群人和年輕人都看了看老者的心,只見上面布滿傷痕。心上的一些部分被取走了,另外補上了其他人的,但并不十分吻合,還有幾處邊緣參差不齊。事實上,他的心上有些地方留下了深深的凹痕,整瓣整瓣的心都不見了。

　　年輕人笑道:"跟你的心相比,我的心才是完美的,你的心滿是疤痕。"

　　"沒錯,"老者說:"你的心看上去很完美,但是我永遠不會和你交換。你瞧,每處傷痕都代表一個我曾愛過的人。我撕下自己的一片心給他們,他們往往也會給我一片他們的心,填補我心中缺失的那部分。

　　"但是由于每片心大小并不完全相同,我的心有些粗糙的邊緣,不過我很珍惜,因為它們讓我想起我們之間分享過的愛。

　　"有時我把自己的幾片心送出去,其他人卻沒有向我回饋他們的心。這些便成了空著的深痕--付出愛本來就是一種冒險。

　　"盡管這些凹痕讓我感到痛苦,但它們敞開著,讓我想起我對他們付出的愛,并希望有朝一日能得到回饋,填滿這等待已久的空間。所以,現在你明白什么才是真正的美了嗎"

　　年輕人走到老者面前,把手伸進自己完美的心中,撕下了一片,贈給了老者。老者把這片心放進自己的心里,然后從自己那顆蒼老而又傷痕累累的心上撕下一片,放入年輕人心上的傷口。雖然能夠放進去,但不十分吻合,因為有的邊緣凹凸不平。

　　年輕人看了看自己的心,它雖然不再完美,卻更加美麗,因為老者心中的愛流入了他的心田。

　　他們互相擁抱,然后并肩前行。

　　人這一生如果一直保持著一顆完整未動的心是多么可悲啊!

　　篇三：英語作文

　　1、Directions：This part is to test your ability to do practical writin9．You are required to complete the I．0．U．FORM according to the information given in Chinese．Remember to write the notice on the Translation/Composition Sheet．說明：英語系舉辦新年晚會，向市話劇團借以下物品：

　　手風琴(accordion)一把；吉他兩把；演出服(costumes)10套。

　　一定小心使用，保證不會損害。借期為一個禮拜。

　　以英語系的名義，寫一張欠條，時間是2005年12月28日。

　　Words for reference：

　　話劇團：drama troupe

　　【經典范文】

　　I．O．U．FORM

　　Borrowed from Municipal Drama Troupe the following items：

　　One accordion

　　Two guitars

　　10 sets of costumes

　　We would be very careful and not do any damage to them．We promise to return them within one week．

　　English Department

　　Dec 28th，2005

　　2、Directions: This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write a letter according to the information given in Chinese below. Remember to write the letter on the Translation/Composition Sheet.

　　十一期間(National Holiday)，你的同學曉璐邀請你到他家鄉做客。你受到了他們一家人的熱情款待，并且參觀了很多漂亮的名勝古跡。請寫一封感謝信給你的同學，主要包括如下內容：

　　1．感謝同學的熱情邀請；

　　2．對他及家人的熱情款待表示感激；

　　3．表達他家鄉的美景給你留下了深刻的印象；

　　4．再次感謝他們一家人，并真誠地邀請你的同學到你家里做客。

　　【經典范文】

　　Dear Xiaolu，

　　I must write and thank for your having invited me to your home during this National Holiday．I am very grateful for the hospitality you and your family showed to me．Your hometown leaves a deep impression on me．I appreciated very much your efforts in making my stay as pleasant as possible．

　　Thanks again for everything you and your family have done for me! Please come to my home if you have time．

　　Your sincerely，

　　Xiao Dong

　　3、特別推薦：2010年12月大學英語三級考試備考沖刺專題

　　Directions: This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write an email according to the information given in Chinese below. Remember to write the email on the Translation/Composition Sheet.

　　根據以下中文信息寫一封電子郵件：

　　假設你是Fox Electronic Company銷售部的總經理Tom Smith，要求你給某廣告公司的負責人John Driscoll寫一封電子郵件商談一些事宜，寫郵件的日期為6月10日。郵件

　　內容如下：

　　1．確定會談的具體日期是在6月20日；

　　2．通知對方商談的主要內容是關于新產品的上市和廣告宣傳活動；

　　3．希望能建立長久的合作關系。

　　收件人：[email protected]．com

　　發件人：[email protected]．com

　　Words for reference：

　　銷售部Sales Department

　　新產品上市時間the launch date of the new product

　　廣告宣傳活動advertising campaign

　　【參考范文】

　　From: Tomsmith@ hotmail, com

　　To: John@ 163. com

　　Date: June 10th

　　Subject: our meeting

　　Dear Mr. Driscoll,

　　I'm the general manager of Sales Department in Fox Electronic Company. I'm honored on behalf of our company to inform you that our meeting is scheduled on June 20th. The launch date of the new product and advertising campaign will be discussed then Please let me know if this would be convenient for you or contact me to offer your arrangement.

　　Wish to establish long-term cooperative relationship with you.

　　Best regards,

　　Tom Smit

　　生活的真諦

　　True Meaning of Life

　　We have to face our daily life, so why don't we spend every day happily. In fact, life is colorful.

　　我們必須得面對我們的日常生活，那么我們為什么不開心地度過每一天。其實，生活是豐富多彩的。

　　Life is an endless road. There's no stop sign on this road, but sometimes we should stop to have a rest and appreciate the beautiful scenery beside the road. Life is a box of chocolate. You wouldn't know what you're going to get. Life is a lemon. Although it tastes sour and even bitter at the beginning, you will also taste the sweetness inside if you don't give up. Life is treasure. We're always wealthy when we're alive, because we can make everything we need and everything we want when we're living in the world. Life is a special gift. Don't save anything to a special occasion, since every day you're living is a special occasion for you.

　　人生是一條沒有盡頭的路。在這條路沒有停止的跡象，但有時，我們應該停下來休息一下來欣賞路邊美麗的風景。生活就像一盒巧克力。你不知道你將會得到什么。生活就像是一個檸檬。雖然一開始的時候它嘗起來是酸的甚至是苦的，但是如果你不放棄你也會嘗到里面的甜頭。生命就像寶藏。活著的時候我們總是很富有，因為在我們活在這個世界上時我們可以得到我們需要的和我們想要的所有東西。生活是一個特殊的禮物。不為特殊時刻存儲任何東西，因為你活著的每一天都是對你來說都是特殊時刻。

　　However, life isn't always so peaceful and quiet. Life is a story, which is full of turns and twists, but we will find it marvelous after we overcome all the difficulties. Life is a sea, which is full of adventures, but surfing when the wind blows will make us stronger and stronger. Life is an Iceland, which is so slippery, but skating on this land is a good way to test our abilities. Life is a sword, which has its chances and challenges, but we can benefit a lot from life if we make good use of it.

　　然而，生活并不總是那么平和安靜。生活是一個充滿曲折的故事，但我們會發現它是那么的不可思議在我們克服一切困難后。生活是大海，充滿著冒險，但當風吹起的時候去沖浪會讓我們變得更堅強。生命是一個冰島，它很滑，但在這片土地上滑冰是檢驗我們的能力的一種好方式。生活是一把劍，它有機遇和挑戰，但如果我們可以好好利用它，將會從生活中獲益匪淺

　　The Harm of Computer Games

　　Now more and more students always spend plenty of their time playing computer games. Some of them can even play from morning to night. How terrible it is!現在越來越多的學生總是花很多時間來玩電腦游戲。有些甚至可以從早玩到晚玩。這是多么可怕啊！

　　Playing too much computer games has bad impacts in many ways. For one thing, if students often play computer games, they can't do well in their study, because they always think about the things in computer games instead of the knowledge in books. For another, Sitting before the computer for a long time will cause back pains and headaches. And the radiation from the computers can also do harm to our eyes and our minds. What's more, many students are so deeply attracted by some interesting computer games that they communicate less with their families and friends, which will lead to mental problems. Last but not least, some students prefer the fighting games. It is likely that they'll be violent in the real life. That is to say, those who usually play violent games may do crimes more easily. Therefore, the teachers and parents should work together to stop the kids from playing computer games all around the clock.

　　玩太多的電腦游戲在有多方面都造成了不良影響。一方面，如果學生經常玩電腦游戲，他們就無法好好學習，因為他們總是想著電腦游戲里面的東西而不是書本的知識。另一方面，長期坐在電腦前會導致背痛，頭痛。而且電腦輻射也可能會傷害到我們的眼睛和大腦。更重要的是，許多學生都深深被一些有趣的電腦游戲吸引了，以至于他們與他們家人和朋友的交流變少，這將導致心理問題。最后但并非最不重要的，有些學生喜歡玩暴力游戲。他們很有可能會在現實生活中變得暴力。也就是說，那些經常玩暴力游戲的人會更容易犯罪。因此，教師和家長應該一起合作來阻止孩子們整天整夜的玩電腦游戲。

　　The Goal of University Education

　　Nowadays most people go to university not only to learn new knowledge but to get a degree. Many of them no longer care about what they really learn in university, they care more about whether they will get the degree or not. They regard the degree as a golden key to a better jobs or higher salaries. For them, nothing is more important than a degree in university. In my point of view, I cannot agree to this idea.

　　現在大多數人上大學不是為了學習新的知識，而是為了要得到學位。大多人都不再關心

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