中考英語(yǔ)作文獲取高分寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)
在日復(fù)一日的學(xué)習(xí)、工作或生活中，大家都接觸過(guò)作文吧，借助作文人們可以反映客觀事物、表達(dá)思想感情、傳遞知識(shí)信息。相信許多人會(huì)覺(jué)得作文很難寫(xiě)吧，以下是小編收集整理的中考英語(yǔ)作文獲取高分寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)，歡迎大家借鑒與參考，希望對(duì)大家有所幫助。
一、寫(xiě)作訣竅
總體把握，要點(diǎn)齊全；人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)，邏輯清楚；
關(guān)鍵詞匯，動(dòng)詞第一；組詞成句，結(jié)構(gòu)完整；
組句成文，連詞增色；此路不通，繞道迂回；
字跡工整，留好印象；從句適量，高分有望。
二、寫(xiě)作步驟
1.認(rèn)真審題。審題包括要點(diǎn)、格式、詞數(shù)以及此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什么樣的信息，告誡讀者什么(即寫(xiě)作目的)。
2.確定文體和時(shí)態(tài)。確定文體后，根據(jù)不同文體的特點(diǎn)和要求進(jìn)行組織材料；同時(shí)確定出該篇文章的總時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)態(tài)的'變化。
3.寫(xiě)完要點(diǎn)，但不隨意發(fā)揮。
4.先草稿，后抄寫(xiě)。
三、習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)
[20xx年全國(guó)中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)能力競(jìng)賽初賽初三組] (14分)
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers.
what exactly your hobby is;when and how you became interested in this hobby;why you enjoy your hobby;about your hopes and plans for the future.
寫(xiě)作要求：
1. 根據(jù)所提供的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)拓展想象空間，靈活地將提供的信息體現(xiàn)在文章中。
2. 條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰、規(guī)范。
3. 詞數(shù)60-80。
[學(xué)生習(xí)作a]
My hobby is read books. when i was seven years old .
I became interested in reading books. I like needing books.Because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me how to be a good person . Books even can solve many problems for me . I will read more good books to improve myself.
①改為reading books，動(dòng)詞作表語(yǔ)時(shí)應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞。
②also的位置應(yīng)放在can之后。
[點(diǎn)評(píng)]：檔次9-11分。
①要點(diǎn)不全，漏掉最后一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。
②句子基本無(wú)誤，能正確傳遞信息給讀者但文章不流暢，句子與句子之間過(guò)渡不自然，給讀者感覺(jué)在回答上述① ② ③問(wèn)題。
③有少量錯(cuò)誤。
[學(xué)生習(xí)作b]
My hobby is reading .reading books is very enjoyable .
When I was young, my mother used to tell me a story before.
I went to bed every night .the stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren't enough . So I began to read books by myself .little by little I became interested in reading . I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world .when I read books , I can enjoy the beautiful sentences . At the same time I can improve my writing . I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true .
①開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山、點(diǎn)題。
②真情流露，理由充分。
③文中帶圈的連詞使用得恰當(dāng)，使文章過(guò)渡自然、
④巧妙使用句型以表決心。
[點(diǎn)評(píng)]：檔次13-14分。
①清楚表達(dá)寫(xiě)作目的，要點(diǎn)齊全。
②語(yǔ)言表達(dá)靈活多樣，字里行間流露出真情實(shí)感，文章有感染力。
③恰當(dāng)使用連詞和從句，語(yǔ)言流暢，且無(wú)錯(cuò)誤，是一篇高質(zhì)量的作文。
[高分突破]
①文體：記敘文。
②要點(diǎn)：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future。
③時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過(guò)去時(shí)，一般將來(lái)時(shí)的自然變化。
內(nèi)容具有開(kāi)放性，但它也是"控制性"的寫(xiě)作試題，因此不能隨意發(fā)揮，要善于抓信息，寫(xiě)完要點(diǎn)。選用這兩篇學(xué)生真實(shí)習(xí)作，一是因?yàn)樗麄冞x材相同，二是因?yàn)樗麄兌际怯⒄Z(yǔ)成績(jī)優(yōu)秀的同學(xué)。同學(xué)b靈活使用連詞so…that， so， little by little， when， so that等，恰到好處地使用新句型和短語(yǔ)used to， became interested in， come true……等，使內(nèi)容豐富，讀起來(lái)優(yōu)美流暢。其實(shí)這些表達(dá)同學(xué)a也會(huì)，只是缺乏技術(shù)加工。通過(guò)這兩篇作文點(diǎn)評(píng)，同學(xué)們便能悟出其中的奧妙。
四、培養(yǎng)途徑
1. 根據(jù)老師布置的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，獨(dú)立完成一篇寫(xiě)作。
2. 與同伴合作，交流自己的寫(xiě)作，通過(guò)交流找出各自作文中寫(xiě)得好的地方和優(yōu)美的句子，合作創(chuàng)造一篇新的文章，供大家欣賞。
3. 找老師點(diǎn)評(píng)，請(qǐng)求老師指點(diǎn)，尤其是怎樣潤(rùn)色。
4. 自己糾錯(cuò)，寫(xiě)下反思。
五、備考演練
a
縉云山是重慶著名的游覽勝地，每天有大量的游客。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的信息寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道，說(shuō)明現(xiàn)在的游客在環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的變化。
寫(xiě)作要求：
1. 詞數(shù)在100左右。
2. 條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順。
3. 開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest …
b
閱讀電視廣告詞："if we don't save water ， the last drop of water will be a tear-drop."根據(jù)提示，寫(xiě)一篇60-80詞的短文。
提示：
1. 生活離不開(kāi)水。
2. 可飲用水在減少。
3. 水污染嚴(yán)重。
4. 應(yīng)保護(hù)水源，再利用水。思路點(diǎn)撥與參考答案
a. [思路點(diǎn)撥]：
①文體：記敘文。
②時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。采用正反對(duì)比的寫(xiě)作手法，增加感染力。
③寫(xiě)作目的：告訴讀者保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性。
Jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest . Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. but a few years ago，some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment. they threw their rubbish，such as plastic bags，fruit skins and waste paper on the ground. sometimes they broke trees，picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food. How dangerous it was. luckily， great changes have taken place here. tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins， and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well. They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains. All these changes make us very happy.
b. [思路點(diǎn)撥]：
①夾敘夾議(說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀，談?wù)劯邢?。
②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
③廣告詞的含義--水很重要，應(yīng)保護(hù)和再利用(寫(xiě)作意圖)。
Water is very important to humans. we can't live without water. The water we can drink is falling. but some people don't seem to care about it. They waste a lot of water. They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes. Water pollution is getting more and more serious. So we must do something to stop the pollution. We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it. If we don't do this， the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.
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