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　　英語六級作文范文：人和計算機 Computer and Man

　　Computer and Man

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　　Ever since the birth of it, the computer has largely changed human being’s life and there has been a hot debate about its effects on humans. Undeniably, computers have taken the place of humans in many areas and it seems that computers begin to think like man, but this does not necessarily lead to the danger that man will think like computers.

　　The reasons, in my opinion, are as follows. Firstly, when computers release human from repetitive tasks, humans themselves can spend more time on creative works, such as scientific research, which require imagination and cannot be completed by computers. Meanwhile, thanks to computers, humans get more spare time with their friends and family, which enhances their happiness. Moreover, even though computers can work automatically, the premise is that the program, which is written by humans, has been installed in it.

　　In conclusion, humans, unlike computers, have creative ability, emotional desires and social bounds. Thus, I don’t think that there will be the danger that man will begin to think like the computer.

　　人和計算機

　　自從它的誕生，計算機已經極大地改變了人類的生活，有了它對人類的影響熱議。不可否認，電腦已經在很多領域代替人看來，電腦開始認為這樣的人，但這并不一定導致危險，男人會像計算機一樣思考。

　　的`原因，在我看來，如下。首先，當電腦釋放人類從重復性的任務，人類自己能花更多的時間去創作的作品，如科學研究，這需要想象力和不能由計算機完成。同時，由于計算機，人類得到更多的空余時間與他們的朋友和家人，這增強了他們的幸福。此外，盡管計算機能夠自動工作，前提是這些程序，這是人寫的，被安裝在了它。

　　總之，人類，不像電腦，有創新能力，情感的欲望和社會的界限。因此，我不認為會有人會開始喜歡電腦，認為危險。

　　滿分作文 A Letter to the Headmaster 給校長的一封信

　　Dear Headmaster,

　　I am the minister of students' life in the Student Union. On behalf of all the students, I am writing to you to give our opinions about the canteen.

　　Our canteen has something satisfactory and something unsatisfactory as well. To our satisfaction, many kinds of the food are supplied to us. Besides this, the food is cheap and tastes good. We all enjoy the food. And the surroundings in the canteen have also been improved. But the quantity of a helping they give is not enough. The seats are not enough as well.Some students have no seats when eating.

　　Finally we advise them to improve the quality of the food and their service. We will feel very happy if these problems can be solved.

　　Yours,

　　XXX

　　尊敬的校長：

　　我是學生會生活部部長。我代表所有學生給您寫信反映一下我們對食堂的意見。

　　食堂有令人滿意的一面也有令人不滿意的一面;令我們滿意的是，食堂給我們提供了很多種類的食物。另外，飯菜價格便宜，味道可口，我們很喜歡。而且食堂環境也已經改善了。但是他們給的食物的'分量不足。食堂的座位也不夠，一些學生吃飯時沒有座位。我們希望學校會考慮增添些座位。

　　最后我們建議他們改進飯菜的質量，改善服務。如果這些問題能被解決我們會感到非常高興。

　　尊敬您的 XXX

　　網購 Doing Shopping Online

　�。ê笔撸┘偃缒阏跁曩彆�。你對Around China和Olympic English這兩本書愛不釋手，但你只有40元錢。請參看下表，就這兩本書的相關內容(content)進行比較，選擇購買其中的一本，并簡要陳述你的理由。

　　要求：1.請首先把你選擇購買的書籍名稱填在文首的橫線上；

　　2.內容連貫，述理有據；

　　3.詞數要求：80詞左右。

　　Books Price Contents

　　Around China 39yuan the history, culture, places of interest about China

　　Olympic English 27yuan English and knowledge about the Olympic Games

　　I will buy ______________________ . _________________________________________________

　　范文：

　　I will buy Olympic English. It is said that learning a new language can open up another world. I am also able to understand a new way of life. So I want to learn how to speak English well. Furthermore, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing soon. This book teaches me a lot about the Olympic Games, too. And it is cheaper than Around China. Therefore, I think it's better for me to choose Olympic English.

　　I will buy Around China. Though it is more expensive than Olympic English, I believe it is a more careful choice. I am interested in traveling. And I dream of going sightseeing throughout China in the future. The book is full of knowledge about Chinese history, culture and places of interest. It can take me into a wonderful world. At the same time, reading Around China is a good way to relax. So I will decide to buy Around China.

　　我會買奧運英語。據說學了一門新的語言可以打開另一個世界。我也能理解一種新的生活方式。所以我想學習如何講英語。此外，2008屆奧運會即將在北京舉行。這本書教我很多關于奧運會的事。而且比中國便宜。因此，我認為選擇奧林匹克英語對我來說是更好的選擇。

　　我會在中國買。雖然比奧林匹克英語更貴，我相信這是一個更仔細的選擇。我對旅游感興趣。我夢想將來在中國觀光。這本書充滿了關于中國歷史、文化和興趣的知識。它可以帶我進入一個美妙的世界。同時，在中國讀書是放松的好方法。所以我將決定在中國各地購買。

　　2、網上購物 Doing Shopping Online

　　With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job. Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You needn't step out of the room.

　　It seems easy and quick. But there's always a trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big. If you want to be different, you'd better not buy clothes online.

　　Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.

　　在互聯網的`幫助下，購物不是一個困難的工作。只要按你的鼠標選擇你喜歡的文章，并完成購物。你不必走出房間。

　　似乎容易和快速。但網上總有一個陷阱。如果你不小心，它會給你帶來麻煩。你可能會發現這篇文章的顏色與你想要的不同，或者說的尺寸太小或太大。如果你想與眾不同，你最好不要在網上買衣服。

　　一旦你穿上了你在網上買的衣服，你會發現很多人在街上穿著相同的衣服。

　　高考英語滿分作文及名師評析寫信 Letter

　　高考英語滿分作文

　　[全國卷I]

　　【試題回放】

　　假定你是李華，正是英國牛津參加短期語言培訓，計劃星期天去倫敦旅游�；ヂ摼W上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確(箭頭所指內容)。請給該旅行社發一封電子郵件，詢問有關情況。

　　注意：1.詞數100左右，信的格式已為你寫好。

　　2.可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　3.參考詞匯：牛津——Oxford 費用——fee

　　Dear Sir/Madame,

　　I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.

　　As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?

　　How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　尊敬的先生/女士，

　　我寫的更多的信息，在倫敦的一日游。

　　作為牛津大學的一名學生，我想知道你是否對學生有特殊的價格。至于你所收取的錢，它是否包括了所列地方的入場費？午飯怎么樣？是否包括？還是我需要帶上我自己的食物？

　　巡演將持續多久？因為我需要準備好我的功課，我想知道的時間，返回。再說，還有沒有時間去購物？我真的很想看看倫敦的大商店。

　　你的，

　　李華

　　[名師點評]

　　本文是根據畫面的提示來寫一封電子郵件。作者在文章中首先把握了全部的要點，敘述較為完整;其次，作者運用一些過渡句和銜接詞將文章串聯，意思連貫。文章中采用了第一人稱和一般現在時，這是值得肯定的地方。

　　[全國卷Ⅲ](四川、云南、陜西等地區用)

　　【試題回放】假設你是李華，最近國內一家英文報紙正在討論北京動物園是否應遷出市區。以下是你所在班級討論的情況。請你給該報寫一封信，反映討論結果。

　　贊成遷出：反對遷出：

　　1.游客多，交通堵塞

　　2.郊區環境好1.建于1906年，中外聞名

　　2.搬遷易造成動物死亡

　　注意：1.詞數100字左右，信的開頭已為你寫好。

　　2.可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　3.參考詞匯：郊區—suburb

　　Dear Editor ,

　　Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　親愛的編輯，

　　最近，在我們班上，有一個激烈的討論，北京動物園是否應該搬出城市。一些同學都贊成的舉動。他們說大量的游客到動物園將導致交通堵塞。他們還說，曾經的感動，動物將有更大的空間和更好的生活條件在郊區。然而，其他學生都反對這個主意，說的北京動物園，建于1906年，有100多年的歷史，，好–已知在國內和國外。所以它應該保持，它是。什么是更多，移動可能會造成一些動物的死亡。移動或不，這是一個大的決定是由北京人。

　　你真正的，

　　李華

　　[名師點評]

　　這篇文章寫得還是比較精彩的。要點表達得完整而準確，清楚展示了主題。先提出了文章的`主題，進而列出了贊成的觀點及其相關的理由，同時在其后又給出了反面的觀點，論據十分充足。文章結構嚴謹，前后連貫。

　　【北京卷】

　　【試題回放】

　　第一節情景作文(20分)

　　美國中學生jeff將要來你所在的紅星中學學習中文，經協商安排住在你家。假設你是李華，請給Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國后的生活安排。

　　注意：1. 信的開頭已為你寫好。

　　2.詞數不少于60。

　　Dear Jeff,

　　I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.

　　While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.

　　If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

　　Best wishes,

　　Li Hua

　　親愛的杰夫，

　　我華從北京紅星中學。我很高興得知你在北京的時候會和我的家人在一起。

　　當你在這里，我們會為你提供一個你自己的房間，一張床，一張桌子，幾把椅子和一臺電視機。你也有自己的浴室。我們學校離我們家很近，所以我們可以騎自行車去上學。中午我們在學校食堂吃飯。我敢肯定你會喜歡那里的美味的中國菜，喜歡和朋友一起吃午飯。我們學校的課程通常在下午4點完成。你可以和其他同學一起玩球類或游泳。這將是一個很大的樂趣。

　　如果您有任何問題或要求，請讓我知道。我們將盡我們最大的努力，使您在這里的逗留在北京愉快的體驗。

　　最美好的祝愿，

　　李華

　　[名師點評]

　　這篇文章的特點還是比較清晰的，第一，作者根據圖畫將文章的要點概括完整，內容充實而豐富，結構緊湊，有層次感;第二，本文沒有采用華麗的辭藻，但用詞十分恰當，段落過渡自然，令人耳目一新。

　　高考英語滿分作文 The school should organize students outing

　　春天是旅游的好季節,某外國語學校校長要求各班同學就春游一事展開討論.討論的主題是:學校要不要組織學生春游.校長還要求班長就討論的情況用英語寫一封信給他.

　　假定你是某班班長李華,請你根據下列表格中的信息客觀地介紹討論情況.

　　注意:1,信的格式已為你寫好;2,詞數:100左右;3,生詞:拓寬 broaden

　　70%的學生贊成春游

　　30%的學生反對春游

　　1. 可以領略大自然的優美風景;

　　2. 拓寬視野,增長知識;

　　3. 呼吸新鮮空氣,有益于身體健康.

　　1. 時間緊,耽誤學習;

　　2. 增加父母經濟負擔;

　　3. 擔心安全.

　　范文

　　Dear Headmaster,

　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.

　　Opinions on the question are pided as follows:70% of the students think that the school should organize the spring outing. They believe that the spring outing can make them enjoy the nature's beautiful scenery, which can broaden our vision and fill us with more knowledge. They also say that the air in the open fields is fresher. What's more, fresh air does a lot of good to our health.

　　On the other hand,30% don't like the idea of going out for a spring outing. In their opinions, time is very precious, so they have to grasp every minute to work hard at their lessons. Traveling costs a lot. In that case, it will add to their families' burden. Above all, no one can be sure of the safety of every student.

　　Yours truly

　　Li Hua

　　尊敬的校長，

　　我寫信告訴你關于學校是否應該組織一次春季郊游的討論。

　　對問題的看法有如下：70%的學生認為學校應該組織“春季郊游”。他們認為，春季郊游可以使他們享受大自然的美麗的風景，它可以擴大我們的'視野，使我們更多的知識。他們還說，在空曠的田野的空氣很清新。更新鮮的空氣對我們的健康有很大的健康。

　　另一方面，30%不喜歡外出郊游的想法。在他們的觀點中，時間是非常寶貴的，所以他們要抓緊每一分的努力，在他們的課程中努力學習。旅游成本很多。在這種情況下，它會增加他們家庭的負擔。首先，沒有人能確保每個學生的安全。

　　你真正的

　　李華

　　中考英語作文模板：The computer

　　The computer is widely used in education，and some people think teachers do not play important roles in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

　　In this period of communication, computer has been used in all kinds of fields widely, and plays a particular role in our lives. Especially computer has become more and more important in educational field, therefore dozens of people considered teachers could be replaced computers that will go with the current of the times. The above point is certainly wrong; this essay will outline three reasons.

　　The main reason is that people's brain better than computer. Firstly, people design all kinds of computer's programs. Secondly, computer doesn't have logistic ideation. Computer only can defend on that designer inputted computer's programs to judge a question's right or wrong. In other words, computer can't defend on thinking that computer independently analyzes a question's right or wrong. In case, designer inputted programs that are wrong. Computer output the result that also will be wrong. If this kind of problem happened in classroom, students would be infused plenty of wrong information.

　　Another reason is that computer's programs designed software of education that could be amended difficultly. If software of education of bugs were found, commonly these of problems couldn't be solved in the classroom. The software was amended that means total of program were corrected, not only parts of program were ed or amended usually.

　　Last but not the least reason is computer is mechanical, it couldn't be suited all kinds of students and different demands. As students' intellect is different, same of software couldn't base on every status of student to set a perfect project.

　　In conclusion, computers couldn't instead of the position of teachers in the classroom, however computer is an absolutely good helper for teacher.

　　計算機計算機在教育領域中的廣泛應用，一些人認為沒有老師在課堂上發揮重要作用。你同意還是不同意？在這一時期的通信，計算機已被應用于各種領域廣泛，并且在我們的生活中起著獨特的作用。尤其是在教育領域，計算機已成為越來越重要的作用，因此教師數十人認為可以取代電腦，將順應時代的潮流。上述觀點肯定是錯誤的；本文將概述三個原因。主要的原因是，人們的大腦比電腦。首先，人們設計了各種各樣的計算機程序。其次，計算機沒有邏輯思維能力。計算機只能在該設計師保衛輸入計算機的程序來判斷問題的對錯。換句話說，計算機不能捍衛獨立思考的計算機分析問題的正確或錯誤。在情況下，輸入的`程序設計是錯誤的。計算機輸出的結果，也將是錯誤的。如果這類問題發生在課堂上，學生將注入大量的錯誤信息。另一個原因是計算機程序設計的軟件教育可以修改難。如果教育軟件的漏洞被發現，通常這類問題不能在課堂上解決。該軟件進行了修訂，這意味著總計劃得到糾正，不僅在程序部分，插入或修改通常。最后但并非最不重要的原因是計算機的機械，它不可能適合學生和各種不同的要求。學生的智力是不同的，相同的軟件無法根據每一個學生的身份設定一個完美的計劃。總之，計算機不能代替教師在課堂上的位置，但是計算機是教師絕對的好幫手。

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